OMG I FINALLY READ IT!!
sobs i honestly doubted this came from my prompt because this is really beautiful. ;;
the coffee shop au is cliche (IKR SOBS BUT IM CLICHE) and i'm so happy you chose it and transformed the cliche into something really wonderful!
i really love how you paced the story.. it makes me feel like i'm living in it and not just reading it and then knowing wow it ended already.. ;;
and how weird joonmyun is or how he's just so confused about stuffs and the ending..
the thunder the rAIN in my cheeks ; ;
thank you so much!
this is such a wonderful read!
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