http://sengen35.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sengen35.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] critcapcomm on May 24th, 2014 at 12:31 pm
OMG I FINALLY READ IT!!

sobs i honestly doubted this came from my prompt because this is really beautiful. ;;
the coffee shop au is cliche (IKR SOBS BUT IM CLICHE) and i'm so happy you chose it and transformed the cliche into something really wonderful!
i really love how you paced the story.. it makes me feel like i'm living in it and not just reading it and then knowing wow it ended already.. ;;
and how weird joonmyun is or how he's just so confused about stuffs and the ending..

the thunder the rAIN in my cheeks ; ;
thank you so much!
this is such a wonderful read!
 
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