http://critcapmods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] critcapmods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] critcapcomm2014-05-18 12:07 pm

Borderline (for chichirya)

For: [livejournal.com profile] chichirya
From: [livejournal.com profile] aquilaprisca

Title: Borderline
Rating: NC-17
Length: 49000 words (wails)
Summary: There’s little worth in a detective that notices the small things.
Warning/s: dub-con (only in one scene), brief gore (like really nothing but warning)

Part One: There was nothing comforting about the sea at night; it only made the never-ending night sky seem even more infinite, where the stars would glimmer in ripples and the moon would drown in the waves.

[identity profile] taerissa.livejournal.com 2014-05-21 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
this was simply brilliant to read.
never thought it would be minseok tbh.
i thought it would be jongdae lmao /hides/
and luhan awww hahahahahaha
this was really amazing ahhhhh
words cannot explain what i feel right now after reading this!! Q A Q
i enjoyed this sfm ahhhh
<3333333
i love that vixx was also included in the story huehuehue u w u
god this is amazing

[identity profile] chichirya.livejournal.com 2014-05-23 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I WAS GOING TO POST A LONG-ASS COMMENT ABOUT EVERY BIT THAT I LOVED ABOUT THE FIC BUT I WAS SUCH AN IDIOT WHO ACCIDENTALLY DELETED EVERYTHING I'M SUCH AN IDIOT NOW I'M TOO LAZY TO REWRITE ㅠㅠ

BUT I LOVE THIS, AUTHOR-NIM, IN ALL OF ITS 49000 WORDS GLORY
YUNHO! ISUCH A WONDERFUL SURPRISE TO SEE HIM HERE FOR WHATEVER ROLE
LOVE/HATE JUNDAE! DEAR LORD, JUNMYEON IS SO DIFFICULT LMAO
ALSO, A LOT OF SEXY TIMES HM
BUT MY FAVORITE PART IS THE DREAM, YES. THAT WAS REALLY GOOD AND VERY WELL WRITTEN.
MINSEOK BEING THE KILLER REMINDED ME OF THE CUCKOO'S CALLING? :) HAVE YOU READ THAT. THAT'S GOOD TOO :D

I'M SORRY FOR THE CAPS BUT I'M VERY UPSET WITH MYSELF BUT I AM TOTALLY IN LIKE THIS ♥

[identity profile] exzhile.livejournal.com 2014-05-28 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
im am in love with the story.
i love everything and it's worth reading :))
i like reading longer stories and this definitely is one of the greatest. it makes me wanting to read more.

i find luhan very very amusing and the thing he's doing every night. haha. he is such adorkable xP
And jongdae being all over joonmyun is the bestest,,,i love how he makes joonmyun being caught off-guard and
his adoration to joonmyun.

the story is love <3
written beautifully.
epic.